Edited by StarkJeter, 22 September 2012 - 06:28 PM.
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Just'a Dream'n
Posted 05 September 2012 - 04:25 PM
Hey everyone...Thought I'd share a little sneak peek at the work I've been doing a comic book with KING Comics.
Just call me Jete
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Posted 05 September 2012 - 06:17 PM
Love this!!
Pro's: Great action. Good detail on chraracters! Anatomy rocks! The clothin and material looks really pro.
Con's: His mouth in panel 3 is a bit too scewed. Its tough to know where to put a mans hand when he's getting kicked in his junk, so have him be slightly reaching for her. His face will sell the pain. Right now his hand looks too feminine.
Pro's: Great action. Good detail on chraracters! Anatomy rocks! The clothin and material looks really pro.
Con's: His mouth in panel 3 is a bit too scewed. Its tough to know where to put a mans hand when he's getting kicked in his junk, so have him be slightly reaching for her. His face will sell the pain. Right now his hand looks too feminine.
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HONK!
Posted 09 September 2012 - 09:09 AM
Good action and flow of panels, especially the stair sequence.
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Just'a Dream'n
Posted 22 September 2012 - 06:29 PM
Here is another page that I was given the all clear to post.
All rights belong to KING Comics
And thank you boys
All rights belong to KING Comics
And thank you boys
Edited by StarkJeter, 22 September 2012 - 06:29 PM.
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Posted 24 September 2012 - 01:20 PM
I love the way you framed this page!
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Posted 01 October 2012 - 11:13 AM
You have a strong story flow going. Keep it up 
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