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Little something WIP

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#1 StarkJeter

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Posted 15 July 2012 - 05:45 PM

One of my weekend drawings. Thought I'd share and gets some input.

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#2 JDcunard

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Posted 15 July 2012 - 07:50 PM

I like! the picture got spunk!
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#3 Furious Nick

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Posted 16 July 2012 - 04:40 AM

I love seeing the Mass Effect work you do. The figure is pretty flawless, and the only thing that I can say in the way of a crit is the left hand looks weird with the riffle. For some reason I don't see holding a gun that way, and it draws my attention to the awkwardness.

#4 StarkJeter

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Posted 16 July 2012 - 05:00 AM

Thank you Nicky :D

I agree with you on that hand. Struggled to even get that pose. So do you think switching it so that she is holding the handle that it would fix the issue?

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#5 Furious Nick

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Posted 16 July 2012 - 05:04 AM

View PostStarkJeter, on 16 July 2012 - 05:00 AM, said:

Thank you Nicky :D

I agree with you on that hand. Struggled to even get that pose. So do you think switching it so that she is holding the handle that it would fix the issue?
Yeah, that should help. I believe she's causally resting the butt of her riffle on her hip. If that is the case you may have to adjust that entire arm. I really like the anatomy, it's just strange where it connects with the gun. If she were holding it by the muzzle that might be a bit better and you would have less to adjust... maybe.

#6 StarkJeter

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Posted 16 July 2012 - 05:06 AM

Okay hmmmm....I'll see what I can do about that. Thanks for the advice :D

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#7 rmansperger

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Posted 16 July 2012 - 05:17 AM

awesome job StarkJeter!

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Posted 16 July 2012 - 11:01 AM

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Thank you Rob :D

Okay since I'm home sick, figured I give that arm another try. In between my spells of visits to the bathroom of course ;)

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#9 StarkJeter

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Posted 16 July 2012 - 11:02 AM

Oops i forgot to finish the Normandy tattoo on her arm. Oh well I fix it next go around.

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#10 Furious Nick

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Posted 16 July 2012 - 11:05 AM

View PostStarkJeter, on 16 July 2012 - 11:01 AM, said:

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Okay since I'm home sick, figured I give that arm another try. In between my spells of visits to the bathroom of course ;)

NICE Gun show!
Sorry about you being sick, but that is pretty d@mn awesome!!!

#11 nate

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Posted 16 July 2012 - 11:07 AM

The only issue I saw was that arm and you've already fixed it. Onto the next one!

#12 StarkJeter

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Posted 16 July 2012 - 11:10 AM

Thank you guys! I'm glad y'all approve :D

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Posted 17 July 2012 - 06:05 PM

I don't know if you ever heard of a game called mass effect....you should try it...you might like it somewhat.

The boobs seem a bit to high....

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#14 StarkJeter

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Posted 21 July 2012 - 06:29 PM

Mass effect? What's Mass Effect?... :huh:

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Posted 21 July 2012 - 07:02 PM

View PostStarkJeter, on 21 July 2012 - 06:29 PM, said:

Mass effect? What's Mass Effect?... :huh:

Nice. And nicely done with your revision. B)





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